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Stuck on a SHORT Story?


Stuck on what to put in your story?
-- This is the list of things I check off when I create a story:

Do you have a Setting in mind?
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- Sci-fi
- Historical
- Modern day
- Fantasy

Do you have ONE big main event for the story to focus on?
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- A battle
- An escape
- A love scene
- An act of revenge
- A sacrifice
- A treasure to claim
- A magic spell
- A transformation

Do you know what you want to SAY with your story?
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- Love sucks.
- Friendship is forever.
- No good deed goes unpunished.
- A snake can only ever be a snake.
- Sometimes you have to take chances.
- Magic makes things worse, not better.

Do you know where you want to END your story?
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- A wedding?
- A funeral?
- A bloody battlefield?
- An empty street?
- The bottom of an ocean?

Do you have your three central characters ready?
-- Just to make things interesting, any one of these three could be the Hero, the Villain, or the Ally.
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- A main character that personifies what your story is trying to say?
- A main character that personifies an opposing opinion of the same topic?
- A buddy / friend/ love interest of one or both to personify Joe Normal stuck in the Middle?

Why did I mention Characters last?
-- Instead of making a story for my characters, I do the opposite. I make characters for my story.

Some people can come up with a cool character and then build a story around them. Sadly, I am not one of those. I can build a back-story just fine, but my back-stories are never good enough to be the Main Story. A back-story is how a character GOT his Issues. The main story is how they FIXED those Issues. See the difference?  

Anyway...
-- When I'm stuck on a story, I try thinking on these questions and often, they'll jog something loose.

Enjoy!

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Stuck on what to put in your story?
-- This is the list of things I check off when I create a story.

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Posted as a submission by popular request! (All two of you.)

DISCLAIMER: As with all advice, take what you can use and throw out the rest. As a multi-published author, I have been taught some fairly rigid rules on what is publishable and what is not. If my rather straight-laced (and occasionally snotty,) advice does not suit your creative style, by all means, IGNORE IT.
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Ookami Kasumi
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:icontheredclouds:
The idea of developing a character to fit a story as opposed to a story to fit a character is such a simple but brilliant idea! Thank you for the tutorial!
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~TwistedAlyx Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Is the ONE big main event usually the climax? (Maybe an example from a Grimm's fairy tale? Because those stories are so iconic, I find those examples EXTREMELY helpful.)
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*OokamiKasumi Jul 29, 2012  Professional Writer
There are usually 3 big events in a story:
-- The event that forced the character into adventure.
-- The event where they make their biggest mistake.
-- The event where they face the results of their mistake. Often where Hero confronts Villain AKA: who they Could have been if they hadn't fixed their mistake. This event is normally considered the story's climax.

In Beauty & the Beast:
- Event 1 is where Beauty's father plucks the rose then AGREES to trade his daughter for his own life.
-- Event 2 is where Beauty begs to Go Home.
-- Event 3 is where Beauty faces the results of leaving: a dying Beast.
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:iconjason-renard:
I really liked that this tutorial is a simple and checklist-like. When you want to get something done fast, you tend to skim instead of actually taking your time to read, so it helps!
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*OokamiKasumi Feb 19, 2012  Professional Writer
I tend to do a lot of checklists in my tutorials. Mainly because the notes I collected over the years are cut down to only the sheer basics, which tends to be a lot of checklists.

Checklists are just plain easier to use.
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~Snalf Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
In the name of Amaterasu, I simply adore your tutorials! I love the attitude you put in them an' all that. And they're useful, especially for rpers trying to turn to short stories.
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*OokamiKasumi Jan 10, 2012  Professional Writer
I'm glad you like my essays.
-- I try to keep the BS to a minimum, but sometimes my personal frustrations do leak in.
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~Snalf Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The personal stuff can help it be interesting. Add a little zest~
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*OokamiKasumi Jan 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Well, at least in my tutorials you definitely know what techniques I Don't approve of, (The Evil AS, Head-hopping...)
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~Snalf Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes. xD.

Which, not using those in writing is pretty senseful. Unless you're the writer of My Immortal. Then nothing makes sense. ^^
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