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An Unkindness of COMMAS

I SUCK at commas big-time. I tend to pull a "Mark Twain"; I sprinkle them in…wherever to break up the monotony of the sentence. This article is my attempt to hammer the rules into my brain.

An Unkindness of COMMAS

What the heck are Commas for, anyway?
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Besides abusing the sanity of the writer, the comma exists to help readers organize information in a sentence. It makes all the stuff the author is trying to say easier to swallow. Without them, sentence bits and pieces collide into one another causing confusion; rather like a train-wreck, though not nearly as exciting.

Just in case you'd like to know who m

The NonVerbal Thesaurus

NonVerbal:
Not spoken > Body Language.

Thesaurus:
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Latin thesaurus, treasury, from Greek thesauros.
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n. pl. the•sau•ri (-sôri) or the•sau•rus•es
1. A book of synonyms, often including related and contrasting words and antonyms.
2. A book of selected words or concepts, such as a specialized vocabulary of a particular field.
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The American Heritage® Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition copyright ©2000 by Houghton Mifflin Company. Updated in 2009.

Dialogue is VISUAL
-- Not just a bunch of words.
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Watch the a

INTERNAL CONFLICT

Advanced Writing:
INTERNAL CONFLICT

Note: this is how the professional authors do it. That doesn't mean YOU have to. As with all advice, take what you can use and throw out the rest.

The scene…
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His lips drifted across hers in a warm caress. His hand pressed at waist, the heat of his palm warming her flesh through her corset underlying the deep blood silk gown. His fingers drifted upward, toward her breast.

Desire pulsed within her core, in time with her heart. She wanted to let him tear the red silk from her body, and bury himself in her flesh, but set her palm over his to stop him just below her breast. He was a vampi

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Door to Wonderlandby *OokamiKasumi

Resources & Stock Images / Stock Images / Premade Backgrounds / Interior

Door to Wonderland
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Photo manipulation

By Request ~ I hope you like it, ~PaleScarlet!

Stock background image
Created with Photoshop & Google SketchUp

You have my permission to use, abuse, fold, spindle or mutilate this background image any way you like. You don't need to credit me for it either, but it'd be nice.
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Wallpaper texture by Khaosdog
Keyhole & molding from morgueFiles.
Door from Google SketchUp.

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*BrennaWintjens Apr 30, 2013 New member Hobbyist Digital Artist

I have used ur bg here [link] Thank u!

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~SerialDreamer1 Apr 4, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Used Here: [link] thanks!

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~EllePete Jan 3, 2013

I played around with this tonight...i hope you like it!
I love this background!

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*OokamiKasumi Feb 18, 2013 Professional Writer

Very, very nice!
-- I'm glad you enjoyed playing with it.

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It's my

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*OokamiKasumi Feb 18, 2013 Professional Writer

LOL!

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*Crystal-Syns Oct 22, 2012 Student Digital Artist

Used here ~ [link]

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*OokamiKasumi Oct 27, 2012 Professional Writer

I'm glad you liked my stock.

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~yeril Sep 19, 2012

Used here [link]
Hope you'll like it

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