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------Original Message------
I hear the term 'foreshadowing' a lot. That's when you hint at stuff to come, right? So yeah, but how do I DO it?
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Foreshadowing is when the opening scene of a story is a kind of nutshell prophecy for the whole story.

* In a Horror, this is when the originating Bad Thing happens.
* In a Mystery or Crime story, it's when the first victim is slain, and/or object (McGuffin) goes missing.
* In a Romance this is where the main character meets their soon-to-be lover for a fleeting but memorable moment.
* In a Sci-fi, this is where the ruling Theory is presented.
* In a Gothic, this is where the main character transforms into a monster for the first time.

This also reveals the Premise, or ruling argument that the story is trying to illustrate; what the story is trying to Prove.

•  The results of Revenge
•  The path of Ambition
•  The reality of Love
•  The sacrifices one makes for Science
•  The pain of being Different


The Story
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The meat of the story should fulfill that prophecy using twists, turns, and surprises that compel the reader to Keep Reading to discover 'what's really going on?' Never forget: The readers DON'T want to see what's coming. They want to figure it out THEMSELVES.

However, if you intend to use (what looks like) chance and coincidence to move your plot you're going to need careful preparation. Using deus ex machina (situations, objects, and helpers that were just suddenly THERE without explanation,) is unacceptable. The author should NEVER pull a rabbit out of their hat simply to rescue their hero.

The trick is to put the plot element into your story EARLY without making the reader aware of its importance. Never telegraph your punches. Every choice made MUST seem logical for that character.


The Ending
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The last part is what that prophecy brought about--what happened BECAUSE of the events in the story.

* Were the guilty punished?
* Was the lost object or person found? Plus who did it and why?
* Did the lover gain the attention of their beloved?
* Was the scientific theory convincing? (Or horrifying enough?)
* Did the monster reconcile with their nature?

Always complete each circle you began. Solve EVERY problem presented, no matter how small. Any unsolved problems become Plot Holes your readers WILL notice and call you on. "Hey, whatever happened with...?"

The easiest way to do this is by keeping your Main cast SMALL.

* Hero
* Ally (buddy or lover)
* Villain

Side characters are those who occupy places in the story: the waitress, parents, coworkers, the beat cops..., but don't actually change anything. Main characters are the characters whose actions actually affect the plot.

The more Main characters you have, the more problems you add--which means the more story you have to write to solve those problems.

Enjoy!
:iconookamikasumi:
------Original Message------
I hear the term 'foreshadowing' a lot. That's when you hint at stuff to come, right? So yeah, but how do I DO it?

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DISCLAIMER: As with all advice, take what you can use and throw out the rest. As a multi-published author, I have been taught some fairly rigid rules on what is publishable and what is not. If my rather straight-laced (and occasionally snotty,) advice does not suit your creative style, by all means, IGNORE IT.

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Ookami Kasumi [link]

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~GothKoala439 Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:-)
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~PerfectPlan Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this will come in handy
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*OokamiKasumi Mar 5, 2012  Professional Writer
I'm glad you like it!
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*Pereyga Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thx xd
i never used foreshadowing before but i'd really like too xD
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*OokamiKasumi Aug 14, 2011  Professional Writer
Go ahead and give it a try!
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*Pereyga Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thx =D not sure where to use it yet xd
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*OokamiKasumi Aug 15, 2011  Professional Writer
Then Don't.
-- When writing a story, you can always add things later, so wait until you're ready.
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*Pereyga Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
hey
this is a good idea why didn't i think of that? thanks =D and i just got an idea for foreshadowing today, there was something happening in the story and i thought "hm i could kind of foreshadow this in the chapter before" XD
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*OokamiKasumi Aug 15, 2011  Professional Writer
Remember, Foreshadowing are 'hints' on what's coming soon. Don't make the hints too easy!
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*Pereyga Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i know =D i hate when i read something and know what comes next because it's too obvious ... i'll try to make it as subtle as possible
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